Harry Potter and the Mysterious Gift
Harry woke up with a sudden jolt. The window was still shattered
from the Quidditch game the day before. Harry was just back from
school holidays. He had stayed with his Aunt Petunia and Uncle
Vernon. Torture! That is what it was like living with his aunt
and uncle. They had a chubby son called Dudley who would try
hurting Harry at every possible moment when he was not eating.
Ron, Harry’s best friend, slept in the bed next to him in
Gryffindor Tower. Ron woke up a couple of minutes later to see
that Harry was up and awake. Ron crept out of his bed and
tiptoed across the slippery floorboards. Then Ron whispered to
Harry, “Harry, are you all right? Something seems wrong?!”
“Well I had one of those dreams again….”
“You mean the one where….”
“YES! I mean yes. To tell you the truth I can’t remember.”
At that moment Hermione woke up. She was also one of Harry’s
closest friends. “Ahhhh! I hate it when you wake me up. Would
you please consider the other people around you? For gods sake
it is only two o ’clock in the morning!”
“Sorry Herms.”
“And would you please stop calling me that Ron!”
As Harry, Ron and the rest of Gryffindor tower walked down the
staircase, they heard a lot of the usual mumbling and chattering
of the early morning. Harry ran over to Hagrid, who by surprise
was waiting impatiently outside of Professor Dumbledore’s office
with a tiny, lumpy parcel. “Good morning Hagrid.” Ron and Harry
greeted him cheerily.
“Oh, hello,” Hagrid answered back.
It was too obvious that he was trying to hide something very
important, for when Harry and Ron had made their way over to
him, he had gone all funny and tried to hide the parcel in his
large hands.
“We have to go. Bye,” Harry and Ron walked off with the same
thought on their mind. What could that parcel have been?
The morning flew by nearly as fast as a wild cheetah. The first
lesson that day was potions with Professor Slytherin. Harry
couldn’t wait for that lesson to finish. When it did, he
realised he had forgotten one of his books upstairs.
Harry arrived in his isolated room with only a couple of minutes
to spare before his next class. He quickly found his books and
just as he was about to leave, Hedwig, Harry’s owl flew in and
dropped a letter onto his bed. Harry in surprise walked over to
his bed and read the front of the letter.
To: Harry Potter.
Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizard.
To Mr Harry Potter,
Did you receive the parcel I sent you? I do hope you like it
for I didn’t know what to send you for your birthday.
From
At the bottom of the piece of paper, the name of the sender was
not written clearly so Harry had no clue who had written the
letter. Harry was puzzled but VERY late for class so he folded
the letter and shoved it in his pocket and raced to his class.
Later that afternoon at Quidditch practice, Harry could not
concentrate properly. Even Oliver Wood, the captain of the
Gryffindor Quidditch team, asked what was wrong with Harry. He
didn’t want to tell Ron about the queer letter. He was still
trying to work out what the parcel was.
The next day Harry woke up at three o ’clock because his scar
was aching. He lay awake for several hours working out the
possibilities. He ended up with one likely thought. He also
couldn’t decide whether or not he should have told Ron. Finally,
deciding he would, he told Ron first thing in the morning.
“Are you serious! What do you reckon it was?” Ron replied.
“Shhh! Keep your voice down or someone will hear us talking.”
“Okay, okay. Harry, I am going to guard you or someone might
hurt my best friend!”
Ron did exactly what he had promised. All day, Ron was tailing
behind Harry, mumbling something silly.
Harry had a funny feeling as if something bad was about to
happen. Firstly, when he woke up he couldn’t find his favourite
cloak that he wore every second day, so he had to wear an old
tattered one that he found. Then, when he was walking downstairs
for breakfast, he tripped over Draco Malfoy’s foot that had been
placed there purposely. Harry was used to Draco being nasty, so
it was like he wasn’t even there.
Harry researched in the library what supposedly Voldermort could
have given him. Harry ended up with lots and lots of solutions
but his strongest idea was the wishing mushroom that grows
bigger with every wish until it finally pops and plants
mushrooms all over your body.
A week passed and Harry lay awake every night because he thought
something bad was going to happen. One night when Harry was
lying on his bed, he must have fallen asleep without realising.
It was like he was entering a different world. A lot of weird
looking objects were talking to him, but it was as if as much as
he wanted to, he couldn’t reply. He was falling down a long
endless tunnel. Falling with a slow speed but not slow enough to
examine everything. Suddenly, Harry landed with a great big
THUD!!! All around him were shelves full of lots of fruit and
vegetables. Every shelf was full of fruits and veggies except
for one with the label, Mushrooms. Then a man about the height
of Harry, appeared out of the corner of the room. Harry couldn’t
quite tell who it was for they were wearing a long brown cloak
with a droopy hood. The man placed his arm on Harry’s shoulder
and started saying something to Harry.
“Harry,” someone whispered in his ear.
“Ahh,” Harry screamed. He opened his eyes and saw Dobby standing
there.
“Ohh. Sorry to awaken you sir, but Dobby was getting worried
that you didn’t like the present I bought you.”
“Was that you who got me a present?”
“Well
yes sir. Dobby does remember wrapping
the gift himself, although it might have been a dream? Anyway
who did you think it was?”
“Well I thought it was Vol..I mean you know who. Hedwig must
have dropped it on the way here with the letter you also sent. I
received the letter but didn’t know who it was from because you
mustn’t have written your name clearly on the letter.”
“Silly Dobby. Honestly sir, it was Dobby who gave you the
present.!”
“The only thing wrong Dobby, is that Hagrid must have found the
present on his way here because he gave it into Professor
Dumbledore. What was it anyway?”
Harry Potter sir, it wasn’t that much but I managed to get you
and your friend a ticket to the Quidditch Cup this year. They
are the finest seats there are. Dobby wasn’t sure what to get
you for your birthday but he remembered you liked Quidditch a
lot!”
“Ohh Dobby that is wicked but I can not accept your gift. It is
way too much!”
“Please sir? I went to so much trouble to get them. Accept them”
“Oh
alright but just this once. We just have to figure out how to
get the tickets back.”
Harry
turned around and started to write something. When he turned
back, Dobby was standing there grinning with his arms out with
the two magnificent tickets in the palm of his hands.
“Here you go sir. All done,” Dobby handed over the tickets,
“Dobby hopes you have fun at the game.”
“Thank you Dobby.”
At that moment Harry heard a whirling sound and Dobby quickly
said, “It is time for Dobby to leave. Goodbye.”
“Bye Dobby! And thanks once again.”
Dobby was gone in the next few seconds. Even though Harry was
happy he was going to see the Quidditch Cup, he was sad for
Dobby to leave because Harry had grown fond of him.
Although the Quidditch Cup was in a year’s time, Harry was
willing to wait the rest of his life!
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